The coffee firm in my hand and a stroll to the backyard brings me face to face with Wile E Coyote. “How’s it going?” He looks up from the plunger. “Ready whenever you are.” This causes me to wonder how I got to be in charge of the signal for detonation. Waving my hand, I do a Pontius Pilot maneuver.” It is your job” He goes to one knee again, placing his hand on the t-bar slide. “I just thought you wanted to give the go-ahead.” Turning abruptly, a shout of “no” goes over my shoulder while heading for the house and taking cover under the heaviest sofa.
The sound of the C-4 being set free causes my molars to crack in the subsequent teeth clench. The vibration moves me like a basketball being dribbled in the NBA. The separation between me and the couch is complete just as a deathly quiet settles over the room. There is nothing compelling me to look through the shattered windows other than the distant sound of emergency vehicles sounding like a herd of cats.
Courage restored a look at the backyard brings to mind what a volcano must look like when first being born. A vast hole and at least six feet of dirt and turf surrounding it are where the safe used to be. It looks like Wile’s plan from the standpoint of moving the safe is complete. My mind immediately goes to the question, Where did it go?
To find out, processing through the security shutdown sequence and throwing open the front door is done. Wile is standing next to his flatbed truck which also harbors a smoking safe. My stunned expression must have brought some satisfaction to Wile since he smiles and hands me an envelope. He climbs up into the truck and waves goodbye. As he drives off, I can see the door of the safe open like a hatch on a tank, and Sam’s head slowly appear. Waving to Sam brings nothing in return but an obscene sign with his upraised fist. Sighing with relief and looking forward to being alone in my element, I open the envelope. Inside were two things. The first is Wile’s bill, and the second a note from Linda Hill. It reads. Your Friday prompt for Stream of Consciousness Saturday is “element.” Use it any way you’d like. Have fun!
If you would like to have fun, visit Linda’s blog and read how. Here is the link. https://lindaghill.com/2022/10/28/the-friday-reminder-and-prompt-for-socs-oct-29-2022/
Element by John W. Howell © 2022
“You just squeaked that prompt one in.”
“Yes, but don’t tell anyone.”
“Who am I going to tell?”
“Are you kidding me? You have a pack of fans.”
“A pack? Having fans is a little out of my element.”
“Oh, come on. You love it.”
“How do you know I have fans.”
“See the comment section down there?”
“Yeah.”
“Every week, someone wants to know more about you.”
“You’re kidding.”
“No. There is an element of danger in you that some people find attractive.”
“Danger?”
“Yup.”
“Like what kind of danger?”
“You seem to be single.”
“Well, yeah.”
“No visible means of support.”
“Okay.”
“Drinks a lot.”
“Guilty.”
“All in all, a very dangerous fellow.”
“I see what you mean. Folks like that?”
“Hey, any man who drinks all the time can’t be all bad.”
“Who said that?”
“Well, the element of drinking was espoused by W.C. Fields.”
“Sounds like a good element.”
“You finished with the discussion about fans?”
“For now. Let’s turn to VooDoo Ranger.”
“You’re buying?”
“Yup. You got the Uber.”
“On it.”
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Thank you for sharing, Michael.
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Beautiful, John! By the way, i love your great expressive sentences like “The separation between me and the couch is complete just as a deathly quiet settles over the room.” A novel by itself. 😉 Best wishes, Michael
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Thank you, Michael. You are very kind. 😁
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Great work with the prompt, John and I’m glad you survived the safe removal. Not all of Wile’s plans work out so well. I hope that bill leaves room in the budget for your friend “with no visible means of support.”
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Ha ha ha. The friend happens to be in oil so at least for now although invisible he has support. Thanks, Dan.
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I read this before coffee so it too me a minute to shake the image of a toilet plunger 🪠 out of my mind. Obviously I am not yet in my element. I am going back to read your last two episodes of SOCS I missed. Have a great weekend, John.
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Thank you, Maggie. I’m not sure where that image came from. 😁
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It is a dark journey trying to understand my thought process.
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Usually comes out well though.
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The “element of drinking” takes the prompt in places few could have imagined. Very clever, John. I hope the weather elements treat you kindly this weekend, especially with Halloween fast approaching. 🍂🎃 🍂
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They are forecasting for sunny and coolish (low 80s) temperatures for Halloween. Should be nice.
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C-4 explosion is certainly one way to start the weekend.
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Yes, and now no windows in the house.
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Well, at least the safe is gone from the back yard! A successful Wile E. Coyote endeavor”? Will wonders never cease!
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I thought that would be different. Now about those windows.
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Oh, right, those shattered windows . . .
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Still cleaning up the glass.
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Impressive aim! I’m going to miss Sam. You never disappoint my friend. I’m still smiling.
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Thank you, Pamela. I’m so glad you enjoyed it.
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You didn’t play it . . . wait for it . . safe with this prompt, Boss. You should be the next “Most Interesting Man In The World” for Dos Equis and I ain’t kidding.
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Ha ha ha. Thanks, Pilgrim. 😁
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😉
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😊
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That’s some major teeth clenching! Good one, John!
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Happy Saturday to you, Jill *Sung to the tune of Monster Mash by Bobby Pickett.
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Perfect!
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😊
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Glad the safe hit the truck. I was afraid Sam would wind up in orbit with Duck Dodgers.
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Ha ha ha
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I wonder who will invade your property next. 🙂
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Tune in next week. I’m sure there will be someone or something.
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Yippee
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😊
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You know what I’ve been thinking during the evolution of this series? It’s how your fabulously written (seriously wonderful prose here) intros have replaced your Wednesday story. Very smart of you.
Plus, an excellent way of slipping in the prompt. Love it!
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Thank you Dale. You have made me blush. This series allows me to practice a first person narrative without using “I.” 😊
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Blush away, John. I’ve been wanting to tell you for weeks. Your practising has been garnering wonderful results! 🙂
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Aww. Big hug for you. 🤗
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Right back at ya, my friend. 🤗
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😁
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Great finish to the safe house predicament, John, told with an element of craziness. 🙂 I don’t think Daniel Espinosa could match it.
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Ha ha ha. Thank you, Tim 😊
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😁
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Thank Goodness you finally got rid of the safe and those two retobates 💜💜💜
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Yes We did. Now for the clean-up.
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I send Vlad over to help 🎃
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I need him.
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He’s on his way now 😂
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Oh Good cause 26 windows are blown out. (actually blown in.)
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He is bringing his cousin who’s a glazier 🎉🎃
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Oh good. Thank you, Willow.
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🤭🤭
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😁
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We have met the enemy…and they are gone thank God…so let’s rent a dumpster and get to work getting our house in order.
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Ha ha ha. Thank you, Bruce.
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A Pontius Pilot maneuver—I didn’t see that one coming. 🤣
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Thanks, Pete.
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That’s quite an introduction, John. But you seem to be in your element. And your fans agree. 🙂
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Thanks, Diana. It is an exercise in trying to get better at first person narrative without using the pronoun “I”
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Hard to do!
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Does take some work for sure.
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Whew! I was worried about the plunger, but it worked to get the safe to the truck. And Pontius Pilot, that was excellent! But, there is a disaster to clean up.
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Much glass and plaster.
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I imagine so…
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😊
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Whew! Finally that safe is gone, and hopefully gone for good. 🙂 Great use of the prompt!
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Thank you. Yes hopefully gone for good.
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Something’s not right? Wile’s plan worked. You were dribbled like a basketball, but no bones are broken, and the safe didn’t crash through your roof and land on you.
I’m not convinced that Wile is going to succeed, in the end, esp. with Sam freed from the safe.
You’d better pay Wile’s bill asap. He’s going to need the cash for the hospital.
You lead a dangerous life, John!
🐂💋🐂💋
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I do live a dangerous life for sure. Thank you, Resa 🐂💋🐂💋
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🐂💋🐂💋
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🐂💋🐂💋💣
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WELL!
Although I’m sure you mean that in the good way. Like… She’s da bomb!
🐂💋🍷🍷🍷🍷🐂💋 (drunk on love)
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You got the meaning exactly.🐂💋🍷🍷🍷🍷🐂💋
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Spill the wine for sure.
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So erotic….
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Yup. 😁🍷
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…. hypnotic…
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That too. 🍷 Naked to the world.
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I am? 🍷
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Not sure. The song says so. 🍷
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Well, okay….. if it’s in the song! 🍷🍷
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Yes the song. 🍷🍷🍷
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