Tuesday Anything Possible – Kreative Kue #114 by Keith Channing

In Keith’s words.

“Using this photo (below) as inspiration, write a short story, flash fiction, scene, poem; anything, really; even just a caption for the photograph. Either put your offering (or a link to it) in a comment or email it to me at keithchanning@gmail.com before Sunday evening UK time. If you post it on your own blog or site, a link to this page would be appreciated, but please do also mention it in a comment here. Thank you for taking part.”

The photo.

A link to Keith’s post: https://keithchanning.wordpress.com/2024/01/08/kreative-kue-414/

Wake Up by John W. Howell © 2023

“Sir. Wake up. Open your eyes.”

“Huh. W-who are you?”

“Someone who saw you fall.”

“That light is so unusual.”

“You took a bad fall. Do you remember it?”

“The last thing I remember is looking out over the ocean.”

“Well that rock you were standing on let go.”

“I fell all the way to the water?”

“Not quite. You landed on this outcrop of stone.”

“Why can’t I see anything but the light?”

“Don’t worry. You will in a few moments.”

“How did you reach me here?”

“Truth? I had to jump here from where you fell.”

“So we both are stranded?”

“Not exactly stranded. We’ll be okay.”

“I’m beginning to see more the light is fading.”

“See I told you that would happen.”

“How far are we from the water?”

“Looks like about a thousand feet to me.”

“That cliff was two thousand feet above the water. That means I fell a thousand feet?”

“Your math is pretty good.”

“Wait. Why am I still alive after falling that far? I see you now and you are dressed like a hippy.”

“Some would say a shepherd.”

“What? Did you say shepherd?”

“I did.”

“So that fall . . .”

“Means you have no more worries. It’ time for us to leave.”

 

 

69 comments

  1. joylennick's avatar

    Well handled and succinct tale in brief! Thank you! Cheers. x

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you so much, Joy. So glad you liked it.

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  2. Keith Edgar Channing's avatar

    Good one, John. Thanks.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Keith.

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  3. John Hric's avatar

    A very brand new day…

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      And life it seems.

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  4. Jaye Marie & Anita Dawes's avatar

    This beautiful image needed a story like that, John, absolutely lovely…

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Jaye. 😁

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  5. Harmony Kent's avatar

    Nice one, John! 💕🙂

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Harmony. 🤗

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  6. Charles Yallowitz's avatar

    This is why scenic views from cliffs scare me.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      I can understand that for sure. 😊

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  7. coldhandboyack's avatar

    A holy hippie, why not?

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  8. GP's avatar

    Look at all the pretty colors….

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  9. srbottch's avatar

    Well, John, Rod Serling would have loved this and it would have been fun to watch. But what a way to ‘go’.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Of course, if you don’t remember might not be so bad. Thanks, Steve.

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  10. Gwen M. Plano's avatar
    Gwen M. Plano · ·

    How wonderful to meet the Shepherd! Well done, John. 😊

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Gwen. Such meeting are great aren’t they? 😁

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  11. Grant at Tame Your Book's avatar
    Grant at Tame Your Book! · ·

    I can imagine his Cheshire cat grin and a final goodbye. “I’m outta here!”

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Yes indeed. Thanks, Grant.

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  12. Mae Clair's avatar

    What a wonderful story, John. That ending left me with a beautiful warm feeling!

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      I’m so glad you had that feeling, Mae.

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  13. circadianreflections's avatar

    Nicely done, John! That’s a lovely cloud as well.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Yes it is. Thank you, Deborah

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  14. Liz Gauffreau's avatar

    A lovely ending to be met by the Good Shepherd and not that other guy.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Yes the other guy would have been a much nastier engagement. 😁

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  15. T. W. Dittmer's avatar

    That picture is really something, John. It is so entrancing to me that it kept me from going on to your post for quite a while. I think your story is a perfect fit for that picture. It sure seems like what someone would see in their heart after falling 1000 feet onto a rock ledge. ✨💥✌

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      I think so too, Tim. Thanks. Glad you liked the photo and story.

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  16. Debbie's avatar

    Great story, John — I love a happy ending!

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Obviously I like a happy ending too. Thanks, Debby.

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  17. Author Jan Sikes's avatar

    What a gorgeous image! And the story fits it perfectly. Great response to the prompt, John.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you so much, Jan

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  18. rabirius's avatar

    I really like the image.
    Great abstract work!

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  19. walkingoffthechessboard's avatar

    In a transitional moment like that, I myself believe it is way better to be greeted by a hippie and a bright light, John!

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      As opposed to a guy in a red suit.

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  20. Dale's avatar

    Hey! That photo is sort of like my rainbow cloud that I shared on WW last Wednesday!
    And nice take on that prompt… methinks he is off to a better place, now.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Yes it was. He is off to a better place. Thanks, Dale.

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  21. D.L. Finn, Author's avatar
    D.L. Finn, Author · ·

    I like the twist and who he meets, John 🙂

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Denise. I’m glad.

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  22. Mar's avatar

    I love this, John! Such a great take on the interesting photo.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Mar. The photo is terrific for sure. Gad you liked the story.

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  23. Kymber @booomcha's avatar

    I love this story, John. You told it well.

    I reckon he’s going to a better place. 🙂

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Kymber. Yes I think so.

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  24. Dan Antion's avatar

    A Good Shepherd takes care of his flock. Very nicely done. John.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Dan

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  25. Unknown's avatar

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thanks for the link, Dan

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  26. Jennie's avatar

    Well done, John!

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Jennie.

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      1. Jennie's avatar

        You’re welcome, John.

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  27. Teagan Riordain Geneviene's avatar

    The photo was unexpected for one of Keith’s prompts. I wondered where you would go with it. The hippie remark gave me a chuckle, John. Lovely work. Hugs.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Teagan. 🤗

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  28. Tails Around the Ranch's avatar

    Wow, nice weaving of the prose to the pic, John. Well done.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Monika. 😁

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  29. D. Wallace Peach's avatar

    This has hints of the Last Drive in it, John. Sounds like a peaceful way to go. Great story.

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Diana

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  30. Sorryless's avatar

    Looks like he’s going on a nice long vacation, and he won’t have to sweat the mailbox!

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      That is for sure. 😁

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  31. Lauren Scott, Author's avatar

    I love this story, John, along with the image. Well done!

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you, Lauren.

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    […] Wake Up by John W. Howell © 2024 […]

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    […] Wake Up by John W. Howell © 2024 […]

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    1. John W. Howell's avatar

      Thank you for posting my story Keith.

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